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Post by Alex the Steamed Rice Eater on Feb 18, 2009 18:29:49 GMT -5
One small thing... It seems like it's about 40% Warriors when it comes to the tribe's traditions. Maybe you should make it a tad bit more original?
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Post by Mango on Feb 18, 2009 19:09:12 GMT -5
All right, like japan said, I'm no expert either, but THAT WAS AWESOME!! period. no doubt about it, you are awesome! I have planned to become a writer in the future.
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Post by Mango on Feb 18, 2009 19:10:31 GMT -5
xox you've knocked me dead
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Post by Chachafu on Feb 24, 2009 18:57:35 GMT -5
I have read the first post and I love it. I can't read the others right now because I have to eat dinner. It's really great so far!
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Post by Super Lemon on Feb 28, 2009 15:31:13 GMT -5
Jacques cousteau, that's awesome!
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