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Post by Fuzzybreath on Jul 28, 2009 17:55:44 GMT -5
Loudtalon walked bu the river, his mind frozen. After having kits with Snowstorm his life became harder. Starclan said that he was going to die, but why him out of all the cats, he was a father. He saw a tree, right when his eyes meet a leaf fell down all brown a cracked. Was this a sign? Loudtalon went over to the tree, anger went through him he started raking his claws down the tree letting out his anger. He lost it for one moment, he pushed his head the tree. Pain rushed through his head, he just wanted a break. Snowstorm was so sweet and kind, she would have to be by herself when he left. Blood ran down his face, he walked away from the tree. Blood got into his eyes, he walked strait into the river. Water went over his head, just like when he was an apprentice but he had to mentor to get him out. Blinded and confused he tried to reach the top for air but he went down. A starry figure was in front of him, his first mate, Tigereyes. Loudtalon saw her come forward, he was now on top of the mountains with Tigereyes. Loudtalon didn't have stars in his fur, but his face wasn't bloody.
"Loudtalon don't be mad, a life that fits you is coming..." She said.
"But what! What!..." He said but he was back in the river.
He felt Tigereyes right next to him leading up to the top for air. At the first breath she was gone. He started swimming but falling back under, he hoped that there was someone here that could save him.
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Post by ~Spring~ on Jul 28, 2009 18:22:03 GMT -5
Swiftshadow plucked a fish from the river, adding it to the pile of kill that he had. So far, I have two fish- Swiftshadow heard someone fall into the river and looked up. His fears were confirmed when he saw a cat in the water. Swiftshadow ran up closer and recognized the cat as Loudtalon. Loudtalon! Hang on, I'm coming! He thought.
Swiftshadow panicked for a moment, but plunged into the water. The water swallowed him up, but he forced himself to swim, and swam to Loudtalon, hoping that he wasn't too late to save him.
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Post by Fuzzybreath on Jul 28, 2009 19:23:46 GMT -5
Loudtalon saw a cat coming toward him, yes just what he needed. He grabbed onto Swiftshadow swimming better now with help, he reached up to get some more air. His lungs refilled, her started swimming to the shore, climbing back onto land he saw Tigereyes watching him.
"Tigereyes..." He said with his last breath.
Loudtalon looked back at Swiftshadow, he just saved his life.
"Thank you Swiftshadow, your a good friend. I do have one question, can warriors get dreams from StarClan?" He asked sitting up.
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Post by ~Spring~ on Jul 29, 2009 9:42:31 GMT -5
Swiftshadow swam to the edge of the river, and pulled himself up onto land. He sat down, looking at Loudtalon. "Your welcome." He pondered Loudtalon's question for a moment. "Well, I'm not the person to ask. Maybe some cats can get dreams from Starclan, but I don't know." He took a pause and looked up at the sky. "By the way, you seem to be a bit tense lately. Is something wrong?" He asked. Swiftshadow had noticed that Loudtalon had been acting a little bit strange lately. It's not like him to fall into the river..... He thought while looking at Loudtalon again.
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Post by Fuzzybreath on Jul 29, 2009 10:22:12 GMT -5
"I have so much to do and this one question just is hunting me down, you wouldn't believe me if I told you. Yes I have been tense, I just want one day were I can just be my old self. Always having fun, laughing with my best friend, oh how much I miss him. Do you remember those days were it it was just prefect. Now so many bad things are happening to us, my daughter ran away...."He said looking down at the ground, he just couldn't get his mind off Mousekit. Now she was gone, Tigereyes, Sharpfang, and his little brother Bluepaw that never made it through.
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