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Post by Fuzzybreath on Sept 8, 2009 16:40:43 GMT -5
Loudtalon stalked into the camp at the dead of night, his eyes didn't blink as he saw his old home. After leaving RiverClan he went crazy following the ways of the dark forest. He hated Lightstar, he wanted to kill him with his own claws. He had only hunted on RiverClan and killed three kits in ThunderClan to prove to the dark forest that he would do anything. He licked his licks ready to taste the blood of Lightstar. If he saw Snowstorm or any of his kits he wouldn't hurt them but Dawnlight that filthy half-breed. He wanted to kill both of them here and now. He went into Lightstar's den, his plain yellow eyes glowed in the night, you could see that brown tabby face so evil. He walked over to Lightstar ready to leap. As he did so he grabbed Lightstar's neck and started bitting hard as he could. Blood slipped into his mouth, this felt so good. He could hear the laughter of the dark forest as he was slowly killing Lightstar. He wanted him to feel all the pain that he had gone through. He are a growl that was half laughing the other angry. He smelled someone that he knew how she was. Dawnlight. He spit out Lightstar, he looked down at him, yes a killing bite. He had learn that in his dream he a tom that was kill but a RiverClan cat pushing him into the river. "Well Dawnlight, here to see your leader die from a killing bite from your own father? I got in by killing your guards, hope they didn't mean that much to you." He said turned around to face her. "Lets dance." He said leaping on her bitting her neck and at the same time clawing her with his back claws.
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Post by padamay on Sept 8, 2009 17:04:37 GMT -5
Dawnlight walked into Lightstars den. She smelled Blood, very much of it. She made out a figure very familiar. Loudtalon! She felt Teeth met her neck. She knocked Loudtalon off of her and nailed a deep claw into his belly. She had been in a lot of battles but not very much scares. She bit hard on his ear and pulled. She let go as soon as she remembered that he was her father and Clan mate. Pulling away she ran for the den entrance and yelled "HELP!" no one answered. She ran back into the den and stepped in front of Lightstar.
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Post by Fuzzybreath on Sept 8, 2009 19:17:01 GMT -5
"Silly little girl, this time the bad cat wins." He growled at Dawnlight. "You can't help him now, he got an killing bit, medicine won't help him now." He laughed
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Post by Mirrored Light on Sept 8, 2009 23:35:51 GMT -5
The tom could slowly feel the heated liquid, draining from his neck, a slight twitch in his paw began to erupt, his whole body spasming, but the tom managed to make his way onto his own paws, the white tom snarling as the crimson marks streaked down his pelt and limbs. Shakily, he nudged Dawnlight out of the way; his eyes hardened at the pure madness emenating from his former warrior. He sank down on his paws, tail lashing, the positon almost uncertain. "Whether or not you understand what you're doing, StarClan will not forgive you. Never will they guide the paws of someone like you." His voice, even in the midst of battle and close to losing a life, was calm and relaxed, the opposite of the way Lightstar held his body. The tom had Foampaw protecting him, and too much on the line to allow himself to die. His sister was out there; his deputy was too young; his Clan needed someone to watch out for them, and already ShadowClan and ThunderClan had lost their leaders. Even Lightstar couldn't be called experienced at his position; which would make losing a life only that more of a cost. "You cannot win."
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Post by padamay on Sept 9, 2009 15:12:02 GMT -5
Dawnlight let Lightstar push her out of the way. "Lightstar, your in pain!" she willed Lightstar let her fight her father. Lightstar needed every life he had to keep his clan safe. Their was still the Prophecy to fulfill.
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Post by Fuzzybreath on Sept 10, 2009 18:50:15 GMT -5
www.youtube.com/watch?v=v6SJKv1b-TI&feature=fvw
((Occ:Please watch! This is what Loudtalon feels like, he has this song in his mind.))
Loudtalon looked at Lightstar, he would have to be strong. "Thanks for all you did, thanks for the memories. You'll never understand how I find, the wind goes right through I have my heart with me, that's everything that I ever needed. I'm on my own and ready to face whatever comes at me. I'm making a pray but I'm rolling on. It's the wrong that make the rights rights. Your blood tastes like you, old and weak. Dawnlight your a medicine get out of the way. Your devil of a mother wouldn't want you to get hurt. You both are the only cats in the clan that know about my life, I'll live on and on. This night is only made for one death and it has to be the one with a killing bite. Blood will cover the moon." He said walking forward to Lightstar, you could almost see those dark red eyes on him. He walked in a circle around Lightstar, his took in some deep breath in his nose and let them out of his mouth. It was a cold night so you could see his breath in the air. "It's never to late.." He whispered. His heart slowed down everything, he knew what was coming. He looked at the top of the den, through the weeds you could see one star shining bright. He knew who it was. His life wasn't what he expected, he would never belong. He looked into Lightstar's golden eyes, he went softer. He wasn't angry any more. He felt cold wind come across to floor, you couldn't see the ground. Out of no where two starry cats walk into the den, they looked at the cats. "Loudtalon, this isn't your wish. You were taken over by the dark forest, I have foreseen this but didn't think it would happen. RiverClan is your home, don't let the worst get to you." She said walked over to him then licked his on the cheek. "I'll always love you." She said to him them faded away with the other cat, he knew how it was. His best friend when he was an apprentice. He was gone too? He looked down at the floor breathing hard waiting for something, just anything.
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Post by padamay on Sept 10, 2009 19:35:28 GMT -5
Dawnlight waited for Loudtalon to make a move, but nothing happened. He just stould there with a gaze unread able. She didn't know what was happening. Looking into Loudtalons eyes. There was warmth and caring.
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Post by Mirrored Light on Sept 10, 2009 20:36:34 GMT -5
(AUG! Don't remind me off that song... it makes me think of my friend, Lu... and all of his... um... -ness. We're not on good terms at the moment -_-')
The male felt could feel the heat of battle had worn away; after all, what was there left to fight for? Loudtalon, who was a good warrior, even after his apprenticeship had fallen down to dillusion. The dark forest, he could sense that those born into a Clan who were nothing but worthless rogues at heart, they were involved somewhere. However, his gaze met the other male's with a pure intensity, and only mildly surprised that the bloodlusting look from before had vanished. Replaced with love, humility, and something that was to be expected - regret. However, Lightstar was always true to his words. "No matter the reason, you've turned your back on this Clan. I, nor will those who have come before me, can ever forget something like that. No matter how much forgiveness, you must accept that this can no longer be your home." Even though the leader's vision was beginning to blur, the blood loss making his thoughts run together, the words were clear in the minds around him. He raised a paw, ready to strike the end.
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Post by Fuzzybreath on Sept 12, 2009 8:06:10 GMT -5
Loudtalon froze. He couldn't say anything, it felt weird facing Lightstar with no anger. He listened to Lightstar's words intently. He didn't want this place to be his home. He didn't want to be anywhere, his mind was still confused on what was happening. He could feel the sun come up and light came into the den. This must be a sign. He gave a nod to Lightstar, he could still remember Lightstar was a warrior. He gave a smile then left. He didn't know were to go, but he would just move on.
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Post by Mirrored Light on Sept 12, 2009 17:30:56 GMT -5
The tom also nodded; and brought down his claw on the warrior. Without even looking to see what had happened to the former warrior, the leader nudged Dawnlight and then began to walk out of his den. The weakest he had ever looked, limping quickly out towards her den before his pelt was turned completely scarlet. Lightstar's golden gaze was glazed over as he examined the sun rising, passing past the warriors den (of course they would be worried...) and finally in front of the medicine cat's area. He waited, turning back to check if she had followed him out. 'I wonder what is becoming of this Clan now, with each day we're drifting apart, and I can't help but notice the silence of Blood Plains... perhaps, it has come to StarClan's attention that their cats must be tested. Or, is it just me, am I a bad leader...?' He flinched slightly at the thought, knowing Foampaw was always in his dream to help guide him because she wanted to, not because he was useless. There were just a few little doubts...
(You can interpret it how you want xD I'm not making you kill him)
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Post by padamay on Sept 21, 2009 16:06:37 GMT -5
Dawnlight ran after her leader. She moved to his other side to help him from falling over. The question he had asked startled her. She knew the question by heart. "Lightstar, You've been a great leader. When your clan is in troubled times and they need someone to look up to, you've been their. They need you now." looking into the Leaders eyes she smiled. She helped him into the Medicine cat den.
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