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Post by strawberry kiss on Aug 17, 2009 11:43:14 GMT -5
Name:Spottedkit Age: Just 5 moons Gender: She-Cat Clan: RiverClan Rank: Kit Description: A she-cat with mostly white fur, she has patches of black and orange fur. Her tail has a black tail tip. She has milky brown eyes and a pale pink nose. She also has black and orange fur on her head and some on her face. She has white legs that are fairly long. Personality: She's very kind and caring and helpful, but slightly childish in some ways. She's also really outgoing when meeting others ad is very brave. Her voice is always sounding like she's calm but instead, she's really active and hyper. She's one who will speak her mind and opinions without thinking about if she would get in trouble or not, for she will stand up for her fellow cats and friends at all costs . History:Being born and named as Spottedkit when she joined the clan, she's active and very hyper. She's ready to be an apprentice soon, in about one moon. She was given to RiverClan, well abandoned. Her mother who was a loner had left her on RiverClan's border so they could give her a good future. She admires all the apprentices and warriors,from the entrance of the nursery, Wondering about her life as she grows up.She often thinks of her mother and wonders who she is but always shrugs it off and gets back to playing a while after. Roleplay Sample: I have one.
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Post by Charbarboo on Aug 17, 2009 14:21:02 GMT -5
Could you fix some capitalization in there, Rose?
And if she is Spottedkit, wouldn't her position be kit?
~Charbarboo
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Post by strawberry kiss on Aug 17, 2009 14:29:04 GMT -5
oh that, i was gonna make her an apprentice but i changed it so i forgot to change that.
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Post by Charbarboo on Aug 17, 2009 14:51:00 GMT -5
Now, all that's left is some capitalization!
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Post by strawberry kiss on Aug 17, 2009 15:25:18 GMT -5
done~
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Post by Charbarboo on Aug 22, 2009 10:24:19 GMT -5
Accepted.
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