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Post by shadowfern on Nov 2, 2009 15:08:13 GMT -5
Name: Featherpaw Age: 11 moons Gender: Female Clan: RiverClan Rank: Apprentice Description: Featherpaw is an average-sized silver tabby cat with dark black stripes. Her eyes are the colour of the sea. Featherpaw is lithe and agile but is not very strong. She relies on suprise and quickness in fights. She keeps her claws long and her teeth sharp. Her ears are rather large but her whiskers are short. Featherpaw's tail is rather long and fluffy. However, she is mostly shortfurred. Personality: Featherpaw is a fun loving cat who doesn't think before she does anything. Featherpaw will rush into a dangerous situation headfirst and hope for the best. She gets nervous around toms, especially handsome ones. She is confident and bubbly but can be a bit dim at times. History: Featherpaw was born to Littlefeather and Legacyfang. Her brother, Mistkit, and her mother died shortly after the kits were born. Legacyfang looked after her for many moons and Featherpaw looked up to him. Her surving siblings were Sparrowkit and Smallkit. They were sick and had to wait to began their training. Featherpaw was mentored by Skycloud and is just finishing her training now. She wants her name to be Feathermist so she can honour the memory of her dead brother.
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Post by Riverflame on Nov 2, 2009 17:25:04 GMT -5
Cats don't know about the sea, so Sea isn't a valid prefix. Neither is Soul- I'm not sure about Pure.
It's not my decision to accept, but if you just change the names a bit, she'll be accepted.
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Post by shadowfern on Nov 2, 2009 17:58:46 GMT -5
I've changed her siblings' names but I don't know about hers. I guess I'll think of something though.
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Post by strawberry kiss on Nov 2, 2009 19:13:28 GMT -5
you can try dewpaw, im not sure if that works
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Post by shadowfern on Nov 3, 2009 13:18:11 GMT -5
heh i have a character on another site called Dewdrop. Dewmist doesn't really sound right, but I could just use Dewdrop when she becomes a warrior I guess.
EDIT: actually, i think i'll use featherpaw and feathermist if that's okay :3
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Post by Crowy on Nov 4, 2009 5:34:43 GMT -5
Accepted
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