Post by Springy on Dec 6, 2009 17:23:51 GMT -5
Name:
Dawnpaw (Dawnmeadow)
Age:
9 moons
Gender:
female
Clan:
ThunderClan
Rank:
apprentice
Description:
Dawnpaw is a smaller she-cat thats body isn't built for attacking, but she is very swift. Her white pelt would be hard to see on the snowy winter but her Sapphire blue eyes stand out. Her back right paw is sort of deformed at birth but she can use it better now. Her whiskers are pretty long for good senses. she was named frostpaw/kit/leaf because of her really white pelt. Her tail is long and helps her really well to land on her feet.
Personality:
She is a really stubborn feline that doesn't like to be told what to be told. She can be a great loyal friend to anyone. She loves running around and play fighting with other felines. She loves going hunting and is always ready to train. She can be self-conscious at times when people judge her from her leg. She is also a very sensitive feline who is easily offended . Her cry's sound like she is in pain so you would not want to joke make fun of her, or make fun of her at all.
History:
When she was a kit all the kits made fun of her of how she wouldn't become a warrior or even a medicine cat. She always would have nightmares of how she would get kicked out of the clan because she was useless, but her mother would always so you will grow up to be a wonderful warrior. The only kit that didn't make fun of her was shadepaw( I'm going to make shadepaw soon). Her whole life shadepaw was there to comfort her. He would help her when she was upset. He was the only cat that could stop her from crying. Now she dreams of being the medicine cat's apprentice so she could help the injured.
Role-Play Sample:
(this is fom a different site, I a too lazy to wright a new post XD sorry) As the tears ran down Her face she couldn't believe what she heard. It was over! No going back, she thought that hey would last forever. When the tom left she saw the smile on his face. He was happy top leave her. She started to bawl her eyes out! What was she going to do. The one kit that stayed her friend the one kit that never made fun of her. He was always there for her. It was over forever. She looked at his black pelt fading away. "I HATE YOU! I THOUGHT YOU WERE THERE FOR ME! I TRUSTED YOU!" SHe felt a pain in her face. WHat was going on? She was fading away. she ran out screaming! She tried to scream for help but nothing was coming out! SH eran to nfind someone, anyone! She ran and ran but no one was in sight. She was about to give up when she saw someone. She ran for the figure. There standing there was Springtail. "Dawnpaw?" She heard the voice say. He then collapsed. She couldn't say anything. She tried screaming but still nothing was happening. She was close to camp. She got to camp and faded away. She said her last words "sh.....a.....d....e...paw...." It was over.
Dawnpaw (Dawnmeadow)
Age:
9 moons
Gender:
female
Clan:
ThunderClan
Rank:
apprentice
Description:
Dawnpaw is a smaller she-cat thats body isn't built for attacking, but she is very swift. Her white pelt would be hard to see on the snowy winter but her Sapphire blue eyes stand out. Her back right paw is sort of deformed at birth but she can use it better now. Her whiskers are pretty long for good senses. she was named frostpaw/kit/leaf because of her really white pelt. Her tail is long and helps her really well to land on her feet.
Personality:
She is a really stubborn feline that doesn't like to be told what to be told. She can be a great loyal friend to anyone. She loves running around and play fighting with other felines. She loves going hunting and is always ready to train. She can be self-conscious at times when people judge her from her leg. She is also a very sensitive feline who is easily offended . Her cry's sound like she is in pain so you would not want to joke make fun of her, or make fun of her at all.
History:
When she was a kit all the kits made fun of her of how she wouldn't become a warrior or even a medicine cat. She always would have nightmares of how she would get kicked out of the clan because she was useless, but her mother would always so you will grow up to be a wonderful warrior. The only kit that didn't make fun of her was shadepaw( I'm going to make shadepaw soon). Her whole life shadepaw was there to comfort her. He would help her when she was upset. He was the only cat that could stop her from crying. Now she dreams of being the medicine cat's apprentice so she could help the injured.
Role-Play Sample:
(this is fom a different site, I a too lazy to wright a new post XD sorry) As the tears ran down Her face she couldn't believe what she heard. It was over! No going back, she thought that hey would last forever. When the tom left she saw the smile on his face. He was happy top leave her. She started to bawl her eyes out! What was she going to do. The one kit that stayed her friend the one kit that never made fun of her. He was always there for her. It was over forever. She looked at his black pelt fading away. "I HATE YOU! I THOUGHT YOU WERE THERE FOR ME! I TRUSTED YOU!" SHe felt a pain in her face. WHat was going on? She was fading away. she ran out screaming! She tried to scream for help but nothing was coming out! SH eran to nfind someone, anyone! She ran and ran but no one was in sight. She was about to give up when she saw someone. She ran for the figure. There standing there was Springtail. "Dawnpaw?" She heard the voice say. He then collapsed. She couldn't say anything. She tried screaming but still nothing was happening. She was close to camp. She got to camp and faded away. She said her last words "sh.....a.....d....e...paw...." It was over.
Nice to have on board with us!
