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Post by Annikia on Dec 12, 2009 11:44:47 GMT -5
name: Sunspark age: 16 moons clan: Thunderclan. gender: female rank: warrior description: Dark orange she-cat with lighter orange fleck. One white paw on the front left and a white tail tip and ears. Bright green eyes. Amazingly pink paw pads and nose. personality: Brave and daring. She rushes into danger blindly, but her friends level headed witch matches her fiery personality with a cool calm. She is happy and bouncy most of the time and is the best friend of most of the apprentices. She still acts like a kit. History: Extremely happy when she was made an apprentice. Got an almost fatal bite to the neck in the battle that gave her her warrior name. Fell in love with the medicine cat and had his kits. Her siblings and parents are unknown. Her Mate was banished from the clan when the clan leader found out she was going to have his kits. roll-play sample: Sunspark looked into her mates face, and then down at her kits. Three little kits huddled near her, gathered into a large pile of orange and white fur. All the kits looked like her. She sighed. She had wanted at least one to look like their father. "Their beautiful." He mate said. "I know." She stared into the distance. " But their not you. They all look like me, and not you." She lay her head on her paws and drifted into a troubled sleep.
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Post by Crowy on Dec 13, 2009 5:41:40 GMT -5
Good to see you've changed her up a bit Right, 14 moons old is a lil young to have kits. Maybe boost her up about 15 moons, because we can say that was when the previous medicine cat was booted out for taking a mate. Other than that, you're on your way to getting her accepted
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Post by Annikia on Dec 16, 2009 18:35:44 GMT -5
Ok how is it now?
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Post by Riverflame on Dec 16, 2009 18:41:45 GMT -5
If I remember correctly, the prefix "Sun" isn't natural... something about how the sun is uber special or something? Same goes for moon, I thought, but... I don't think it's as noticed. Correct me if I'm wrong Crowy, but wasn't it you who said it in the first place?
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Post by Crowy on Dec 17, 2009 12:23:21 GMT -5
Yeah, but then again 'Lightning' isn't used *prods Lightningpaw*
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Post by Riverflame on Dec 17, 2009 18:33:49 GMT -5
Granted, lol. Proceed, I suppose. You're the admin here- and you did once say that we all got one "odd" name. ^^
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Post by Annikia on Dec 17, 2009 23:48:20 GMT -5
Sooo... Is it accepted?
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Post by Crowy on Dec 18, 2009 11:41:42 GMT -5
Oui~ I'll have fun role playing with you
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Post by Annikia on Dec 19, 2009 12:19:09 GMT -5
Yay!
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