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Post by Tyler-182 on Apr 6, 2009 22:44:48 GMT -5
Name: AstralPaw
Age: 6 Moons
Gender: Male
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Apprentice
Description: AstralPaw is a small newly founded apprentice. His pelt is pure black with small strange shaped patterns of white and gray that almost look like stars; Leading to his name AstralPaw.
Personality: AstralPaw is a happy go-lucky feline though is rather shy around elders and some of the more beautiful She-Cats. Though he is full of courage and basically screams valor. He is also known for getting into trouble. He is also a prankster yet when it comes to obedience he takes his training very seriously... Most of the time.
History: AstralPaw was clan-born (Willing to have another player RP as his mother and such). He wasn't highly accepted to the other clan cats due to his coat at first though they grew to like him. He grew up with ThunderClan and not much else has happened thus far.
Roleplay Sample: N/A (SilentStripe is my first cat)
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Post by Alex the Steamed Rice Eater on Apr 7, 2009 20:20:25 GMT -5
I need at least one more sentence in both the personality and the history. Other than that, you're good. 
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Post by Crowy on Apr 8, 2009 4:23:48 GMT -5
Can I just ask, what on earth is 'Astral'. to be honest, it's like 'Spire'. It's not really an acceptable name =[
sorry, just voicing my opinion
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Post by Tyler-182 on Apr 8, 2009 9:04:45 GMT -5
Silktail astral is an elven word for Star or Stars. It's heavily used in fantasy films, Role-Plays and old school games such as D&D and has become a common term in the english and french languages for speaking of the stars.
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Post by Crowy on Apr 8, 2009 10:49:21 GMT -5
But it's never EVER been used in warriors! Cats don't have dictionaries and thesauruses for these fancy nancy words!
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Post by Tyler-182 on Apr 9, 2009 10:03:42 GMT -5
That may be, But Warrior's is a novel. I may not know EVERYTHING about the series (I only finished the fourth book last night and started on the fifth) Though it is a novel; which is lead by literature including words. Astral is a word; I explained the meaning. Though if you honestly feel that it bugs you bad enough. I am willing to discard this character and create a new one instead.
I don't want to upset anyone on the role-play I simply want to enjoy the entertainment of the warrior's universe. So SilkTail would you prefer I throw away AstralPaw and create a new one?
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Post by Alex the Steamed Rice Eater on Apr 9, 2009 17:54:10 GMT -5
Eep, no conflict. Spire is used for architecture, and astral means stuff like "starry" and all that jazz. I think I might have to tell everyone that they can only use words from the "name help" list. It's becoming a conflict.
Silk is right, the name does not fit in, but astral deals with a subject that these particular cats would know about. In that way, it fits.
Tyler, it's your call.
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Post by Tyler-182 on Apr 9, 2009 20:35:32 GMT -5
Well, First off if you told people they could only use names from the name help list then it would pretty much ruin the creativity and originality in creating their very own cat.
But seeing how this is indeed causing a conflict my call is...
Delete AstralPaw. I want no trouble with ANYONE on the forums. Besides im a sixteen year old punk rocker; how harmful could I be?
So Alex go ahead and delete him. Ill create a new one once this forum is gone.
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Post by Crowy on Apr 10, 2009 4:58:01 GMT -5
Can't you just change the prefix of the name to Sky, or Cloudy, or Night or something? I'm sorry if I offended you in any way =<
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Post by Tyler-182 on Apr 10, 2009 10:12:56 GMT -5
You didn't offend me SilkTail. And I would rather not simply change the name. Once I have decided on a character as a whole I really like the way I have them exactly. if I changed "AstralPaw"'s name it wouldn't be as meaningful to me. So im simply letting Alex throw him under Rejected and ill create a new one. A rouge if they are allowed.
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