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Post by little on May 28, 2009 17:22:58 GMT -5
Copperclaw went to the River he was so sad. All the pain he has gone through. He was here because he wanted to be killed, he knew that a Dead Plain cat would be there, so why not go? Walking along the River looking at the river with the light shining on it's water. They will all be happy when i'm gone, he thought. Dawnpaw will be jumping with joy why not kill him now. He tried to be her friend but all he got was pain. When he was thinking he took a wrong step right into the river, and with a slash he fell in. Swimming just like a fish he got back on land. His copper fur was brown now just like mud. Walking and thinking about how it would be in StarClan he went on.
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Post by padamay on May 28, 2009 17:36:05 GMT -5
Dawnpaw followed Copperclaw from the camp, following his scent. She camp to the river and shall Copperclaw waiting for something. Was he going to wait, for a thunderclan cat to come along and finish him off?
Dawnpaw Loved every cat in the clan, even nasty Lilykit. She did not want Copperclaw to leave, but it was his decsion. She new she could never love a cat like him, maybe friends. She should have accpeted his sorryness.
"Copperclaw, I'm so sorry..." she stared.
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Post by little on May 28, 2009 17:44:46 GMT -5
"Go away I have made my choice," he snarled.
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Post by padamay on May 28, 2009 17:52:02 GMT -5
"It is up to you Copperclaw, I will alwesy be your friend..." she said, disapointed.
Dawnpaw looked at Copperclaw for the last, she turned around and headed for camp, but re-thought and headed tord a high tree with alot of cover not be seen. She leaped up into the tree and watched Copperclaw sit there. She was unseen. She had to make sure he was safe.
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Post by little on May 28, 2009 17:57:05 GMT -5
Copperclaw looked at Dawnpaw trying to hid in a tree. Why dosen't she understand?
"Go away I'm just fishing," He lied.
Looking at the apprentice trying to make her go away.
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Post by padamay on May 28, 2009 18:05:46 GMT -5
Dawnpaw got down from the tree and paded a few paw steps, so Copperclaw could not see her return. She climbed a shorter tree, with very long branchs. She got a better vue, from here then the last tree. She was around a strong smelling plant, so her scent was better hid.
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Post by little on May 28, 2009 19:24:41 GMT -5
Copperclaw went down stream, he started to run. Dawnpaw was getting to much into his thoughts. Next time he would claw her if he ever saw her again. Looking around for Cinder a Dead Plains cat. He walked in a circle waiting for the cat, and if Dawnpaw saw it, who cared she should feel sorry for him. Hunting for fish he looked into the water to see Cinder on the other side of the river. Looking at the cat he felt good, he would be with his family, friends and won't have anymore pain after this.
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Post by Charbarboo on May 28, 2009 19:57:13 GMT -5
Cinder looked both ways. She had just caught a magpie and was approaching the familiar river. The Siamese cat devoured the bird in hungry gulps. The Dead Plains was not a fertile place for prey, luckily, the clans had more than enough... .. For the cats of the Dead Plains, that is.
The she-cat licked her lips. Not wanting to be caught, she slipped into the river. Cinder swam strongly through the river. Before she knew it, she was on RiverClan's territory. The Clan that she had once done almost anything for... .... The Clan that banished her. The Clan that she had longed to lead. But, that part of her life was over now. She was now with the Dead Plains.
The rogue stayed to the cattails, creeping slowly north. She had been making progress, but she heard a snarl. Did her blue eyes betray her? Was it really?
Cinder crept nearer to get a better look. And she was right, it was no other than that naive Copperpaw, but he had probably gotten his warrior name by now. And the best thing was... ... He was alone. Oh, this was going to be too easy.
The she-cat crept closer and closer, keeping to the cattails; Staying completely unseen.
Finally, when she was just a mere fox length away from her former Clanmate, she emerged from the cattail. "Why, hello Copperpaw. Whatever would you being doing out here all alone. Don't you know there are dangerous cats on the prowl." she meowed, in her ragged voice. |
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Post by padamay on May 28, 2009 21:17:50 GMT -5
Dawnpaw kept her eye on Copperclaw, he looked like he was fishing, but she knew that was not the case. She shall Copperclaw's ears move tord something in the bushs, was it a rabbit or bird?
She shall Copperclaw disapper in the cattails and out of her site. She moved to a father branch, closer to were Copperclaw had diappered, she shall him with another cat!
Dawnpaw looked more closely to see that it was Cinder, a Dead Plains she-cat. Copperclaw eyes were serpised, she new that what was going to happen next, she would regreat her whole life.
"Cinder!" she hissed from the back of her thort.
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Post by little on May 29, 2009 14:52:14 GMT -5
Copperclaw looked at his old clan mate, he was ready to die.
" I know Cinder there are dangers here, I knew you would be here," he said.
" And I'm Copperclaw not Copperpaw any more," he said.
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Post by Charbarboo on May 29, 2009 15:19:19 GMT -5
OOC: Her Clanmates knew her as Willowspring, not many knew that she changed her name to Cinder...
BIC:
Cinder smirked. Copperclaw was just giving away his life. "Ahh.. Naive little Copperclaw. I shall make short work of you. And no cat knows where I shall be at any moment. What are you, a medicine cat." she mewed as she crept closer to him.
Their eyes were locked in a quarrel. This will be fun. Her claws seeped out of their protection and sunk into the soil.
"You know, it seemed like ages ago that I killed a Clanmate. Oh, how I miss those days. You all trusted me, and I could really just do whatever I pleased. Now, things are a bit more difficult, I cannot just simple drown a cat in the river and come back looking like a hero. Oh, but that.. .. That was too easy. And you know me, I like a challenge." the Siamese cat mewed to her victim.
Now, she was a whisker away from the brown tom. She raised a paw, waiting to hear a reply before taking a life.
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Post by little on May 29, 2009 15:26:32 GMT -5
Copperclaw looked at the cat, he would fight her to make it looke real but who cared.
"You got a fight," He snarled at the cat jumping on her.
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Post by padamay on May 29, 2009 15:37:39 GMT -5
Dawnpaw staried in shock, she shall Copperclaw jump onto Cinders back. Dawnpaw hated fights for nothing, she half jumped out of the tree, but quickly climb up again. She hoped she was unseen.
((I don't want Danpaw to die!))
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Post by Charbarboo on May 29, 2009 15:52:41 GMT -5
OOC: Padamay, you are power playing saying that Cinder is fighting back, she really isn't before I post. Also, please spell check.
BIC:
Cinder let out a snarl. The she-cat rolled over to rid of Copperclaw. She raked her claws along his sides. Blood starting to emerge.
"You know, this would be a lot easier if you just stood there and took it." she hissed. All she really wanted to do was take this cat's life and move along. She didn't want a big fight about it.
The chocolate tipped Siamese she-cat stood over the tom, if he gave up now, she could easily cut off his air supply and watch his life ebb away. Oh, this was so fun! Cinder stood precariously over the warrior, waiting to see how soon she could end this.
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Post by little on May 29, 2009 16:11:46 GMT -5
Copperclaw did as she said, he looked at her with his copper eyes. Good bye world. Closing his eyes to wait what Cinder would do. He knew her name because he heard at the gathering Blood called her that. But to make Cinder remberRverClan was about he got his claw and sliced her ear and face. Something wrong with typing Bord
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Post by padamay on May 29, 2009 16:21:57 GMT -5
Dawnpaw could not watch, but she had too! She leaped down from the tree and crept a little closer. She was about seven fox tails away. Copperclaw was going to die and it was her falt, she would never forgive herself until Copperclaw did. She would be there for his last words.
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Post by Charbarboo on May 30, 2009 10:20:53 GMT -5
Cinder smirked. "Don't worry, I shall make short work of this. You shall feel a lot." she meowed.
The Siamese she-cat wrapped her jaws around Copperclaw's throat. She clamped her powerful jaws down, cutting off his air supply. Soon, Copperclaw would be no more, and Cinder would have revenge. She felt her teeth sink into the tom's jugular, nothing could top this. |
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Post by padamay on May 30, 2009 14:40:57 GMT -5
Dawnpaw stayed where she was not wanting to be noisted in anyway. Cinder started to cute off Copperclaws air supply. She had to do something, but what?
She got to her paws and walked over to where they fighting cats were.
"Stop this right now!" she yelled. She shall Cinder eyes flick tord her and back to Copperclaw.
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Post by little on May 30, 2009 17:15:54 GMT -5
Copperclaw felt the pain at his neck soon the air will be gone out of him. Looking at the cat that once was him clanmate. He closed him eyes and mind went blank, all the air went out of his body and went limp he was DEAD! He got up with stars in his fur, looking around he saw his mother who had just died. Walking over to the dead cat he felt safe. He would never have pain again.
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Post by Charbarboo on May 30, 2009 20:10:52 GMT -5
Cinder let out a purr as her past Clanmate's body went limp. Ah, the sweet satisfaction of killing another of your kind. What could be better?
The she-cat's ears pricked, what was that? A nervous mew from behind. This might have to turn into a killing spree. But, that would just let her sleep easier tonight, no guilt, no nothing. The only time that she ever had trouble going to sleep was when she let an opportunity of murder go. That is why she never really sleep well while in RiverClan.
The Siamese rogue dropped Copperclaw's dead body with a thud. She turned to face her.. .. New victim.
"Dawnkit, Dawnkit, Dawnkit. Or is Dawnpaw now? Oh, well none of that really matters at the moment. But, you.. .. You saw me commit murder. And, I do want to make this into a wild goose hunt or anything. But, you.. .. You always were the most annoying kit I had ever come by. It took complete restraint on my part not to just stroll into the nursery, send your mother out to get some fresh kill. Then, just kill you in cold blood. Now, my plan was to wait until you were an apprentice to kill you. Oh, how connivance!" Cinder meowed to the helpless Clan cat.
"Now what are you going to do? I've got more experience and strength than your scrawny, weak self. Either you give up, run away, and keep quite about this. Or, you will join Copperclaw." she meowed. |
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